Does the beginning of the first chapter of my first draft intrigue you?
This is a fantasy story I've been writing for a while and I am quite far into it and realised that I'd never received any feedback from anyone because I've never shared my writing. I wanted to get some feedback on it as well as some advice to fix a few of the issues that might be there. I also wanted to know if the beginning is intriguing at ALL and if it's something any of you would read.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1smNnMnmIVnTYxQfLOGMbyMFSL9mdIWO1XGu2g_ilRlA/edit?usp=drivesdk