Critique Thread: Post all [Critique]s here! - July 29, 2016

Be sure to include your age and gender - as those are both VERY important when it comes to critiques! In addition, any information you can give beyond "critique this!" will get you better responses. The more direct you are with your questions, the better answers and less general your responses will be. In addition to posting things FOR critique, please consider critiquing someone else. It's not a community if no one participates on the answering end. Expert level critiques not-required.

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